{"id":364,"date":"2025-07-25T10:08:10","date_gmt":"2025-07-25T10:08:10","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/?page_id=364"},"modified":"2025-07-25T15:45:32","modified_gmt":"2025-07-25T15:45:32","slug":"september-online-class-script-surgery-the-art-of-precision-rewriting","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/?p=364","title":{"rendered":"September Workshop: Script Surgery &#8211; The Art of Precision Rewriting"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/dianabotsford.com\/writing-resources\/handouts\/register-for-the-script-surgery-workshop\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-379 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/register.jpg\" alt=\"Register @ the PennWriters Website\" width=\"150\" height=\"55\" \/><\/a><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-247 alignright\" src=\"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/07\/week4-1-300x171.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"171\" srcset=\"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/07\/week4-1-300x171.jpg 300w, https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/07\/week4-1.jpg 687w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/>Master the art of screenplay revision in this focused 4-week workshop. Learn how to perform precise scene-level surgery while protecting what makes your script special. Through targeted instruction and hands-on exercises, you&#8217;ll develop essential rewriting tools including a personalized Rewrite Plot Map and Character Story Maps. Each session combines practical revision techniques with live workshopping of participants&#8217; rewritten opening pages, helping you strengthen structure, deepen characters, and sharpen dialogue without losing your story&#8217;s unique voice. By workshop&#8217;s end, you&#8217;ll have both a strategic revision roadmap and practical feedback on your opening pages \u2013 everything you need to transform your rough draft into a market-ready screenplay.<\/p>\n<p>ZOOM Class Meeting Dates: September 9, 16, 23, &amp; 30 (<strong>Wednesdays<\/strong>)<br \/>\n7:00 PM to 9:00 PM<\/p>\n<p>$75 workshop alumni<br \/>\n$100 new participants<\/p>\n<p><strong>Optional Add-On:<\/strong> Detailed in-line\/manuscript feedback on your first five pages.<br \/>\n$50<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"text-xl font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-0.5\">Transform Your Script From Good to Unforgettable<\/h2>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\">Your screenplay has potential. You can feel it. But something&#8217;s not clicking\u2014a scene drags, dialogue falls flat, or the pacing stumbles. You know it needs work, but where do you make the cuts without bleeding out the soul of your story?<\/p>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Welcome to Script Surgery.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\">This isn&#8217;t about tearing your script apart and starting over. This is about surgical precision\u2014identifying exactly what needs fixing and making targeted improvements that elevate your entire screenplay.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"text-lg font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-1.5\">What You&#8217;ll Master in 4 Weeks:<\/h3>\n<ul class=\"[&amp;:not(:last-child)_ul]:pb-1 [&amp;:not(:last-child)_ol]:pb-1 list-disc space-y-1.5 pl-7\">\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Scene-Level Diagnosis<\/strong>: Spot the difference between scenes that work and scenes that waste pages<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Precision Cutting<\/strong>: Remove what&#8217;s not working without losing what&#8217;s magical<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Dialogue Surgery<\/strong>: Sharpen conversations that reveal character and drive story<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Pacing Operations<\/strong>: Fix rhythm issues that make readers put scripts down<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Structure Repair<\/strong>: Strengthen your story&#8217;s backbone without major reconstruction<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3 class=\"text-lg font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-1.5\">The Format That Actually Works:<\/h3>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Live Online Sessions<\/strong>: Tuesdays 7-9pm ET (September 9-30)<br \/>\nGet real-time feedback, ask burning questions, and workshop scenes with fellow writers who get it.<\/p>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Plus Weekly On-Demand Lectures<\/strong>: Dive deeper into techniques on your schedule. Rewatch the tricky parts. Learn at your own pace.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"text-lg font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-1.5\">Your Instructors Know What Works<\/h3>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\">Led by industry professionals who&#8217;ve been in the rewrite trenches\u2014and emerged with scripts that sell.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"text-lg font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-1.5\">Investment in Your Script&#8217;s Future:<\/h3>\n<ul class=\"[&amp;:not(:last-child)_ul]:pb-1 [&amp;:not(:last-child)_ol]:pb-1 list-disc space-y-1.5 pl-7\">\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Workshop Alumni<\/strong>: $75 (because you&#8217;re family)<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>New Participants<\/strong>: $100<\/li>\n<li class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Optional Script Surgery Add-On<\/strong>: +$50 for detailed line-by-line feedback on your first five pages (the pages that matter most)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3 class=\"text-lg font-bold text-text-100 mt-1 -mb-1.5\">Ready to Stop Wondering and Start Fixing?<\/h3>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\">Your script doesn&#8217;t need a complete overhaul\u2014it needs precision. Four weeks from now, you&#8217;ll have the skills to make any screenplay stronger, tighter, and impossible to put down.<\/p>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><strong>Enrollment closes soon. Your script&#8217;s breakthrough is waiting.<\/strong><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p class=\"whitespace-normal break-words\"><em>&#8220;The difference between a good script and a great one isn&#8217;t talent\u2014it&#8217;s knowing exactly what to cut and what to keep.&#8221; &#8211; Every working screenwriter, ever<\/em><\/p>\n<h2>2025 Workshop Schedule<\/h2>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>September:<\/strong> <a href=\"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/?page_id=364\">Script Surgery &#8211; The Art of Precision Rewriting<\/a><\/li>\n<li><strong>November:<\/strong> <a href=\"https:\/\/classes.dianabotsford.com\/?page_id=367\">The Things They Carry<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Master the art of screenplay revision in this focused 4-week workshop. 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